Tuesday, May 26, 2015

A Responce to a real STORY

  • Leon Davis Finish the entire story..........It is a great ...........this is a lot of telling ( plot ) and little showing ( Emotional story) showing "His body language not hiding his surprise
  •  but.......... That is fine in this pass through...tell me the story I'm in my chair across the table........Edit later after you Know . This is a sketch. Its a good story don't STOP TIL YOU CAN TELL IT IN YOUR SLEEP>
     
     
    THIS IS THE SECRET TO HELP NEW WRITER'S WRITE THE SHORT STORY AND DON'T STOP ...KEEP GOING TO H 'LL WITH THE WORLD FINISH THE FIRST DRAFT.

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