Tuesday, May 26, 2015

It's a new muscle for me.

The Goal is to write as long as possible, it is not to perfect every sentence.  Don't look to fix any thing... before it is done, first short draft...
Now after time passes Finish a draft
keep moving until its done edit it for everything you learned, get it on paper. 
Write and don't stop for and thing... repeat over and over until you like the story then fix it.

 Have as many people read it as possible

 Raw draft , just started.
CHAPTER ONE - HOOK.  Work on first line and the Check list ,Tell youself the whole story

Nothing dies like you think it will. I had just canceled the Super FORTY SHADES OF Green Lawn Care service that was taking such a big chunk out of my Social Security Retirement. I came down with a case of something. My old Gannie Harold-son would of call it the worried mind.

I thought the people pumping chemicals into the lawn and trees were conspiring with the people cooking up GMO's and stealing the seed supply. My old lady said I needed to see a Doctor. 

What for? I can lay on my couch and meditate any problem. This could be paranoia but if it's real it's the AMERICAN Holocaust. 

  IT started ONE DAY the lawn service man came. He knocked on the door and every time he CAME IT WAS SOMETHING . HE WOULD  notice some exotick new bug on one of my trees. He had some special new anti-gene slice product that would produce a special Round Up eating enzyme and keep the grass green. I told him I would think about it and we might try it when my brother straightens up. ( next time).

CHAPTER TWO - BACKGROUND background

CHAPTER THREE - - review. Not to fix spelling and grammar or sentes structure but to see if it sounds like a story

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